This writing was very interesting because you get all this information about a bowling ally and who frequents at it. It goes really in depth about the men's bowling leagues and how they interact with each other. The mention how busy it is on one of the league nights and how intense the competition. I think it was good that the essay gives good discription about what the ally looks like inside. It talks about how there are no women there except for the middle aged women that works in the concession stand that serves the men the pizza and other finger foods that are served. Her son also works there to help out. Although they do not have one, i think it would be good if they put a bar in. This would make the ally really good money and allow all of the bowlers to have a good time.
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